That was very well done, and an interesting storyline. It was nicely animated and sound was decent.
Except for the black creatures voice. It sounded kind of muffled (I'm sure slightly intentional) but was a bit to low and a little hard to hear at times. You should work on that for the next part.
Which I look forward to seeing! Good job.
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